One day, Jo went to a bookshop to buy a book . It's name is "Beautiful Forever". It is a very interesting book.
After a few minuters, Jo arrived the bookshop. She saw the book on the bookshelf. Jo wanted to take the book. But another hand faster than Jo to take the book out. Jo was very angry. She asked the girl,"Why you take this book? I want to take this book first!" The girl shouted," Why you are so angry! This book I take it first!" The quarreled very loudly. Mant people watched at them. But Jo and the another girl didn't pay attention to another people.
A shopkeeper came and said," I take another book to you, very sorry."
After Jo paid money, she saw the girl at the park. Jo walked up to the girl and said to her," I am sorry, I am too caprice." The girl said ," No, I did something wrong too."
The girl's name is Wenda. She love reading very much. She is an tomboy. But Jo thought Wenda is very cute. They became good friend.
1 comment:
Brilliant story, Cherry; you've focused exclusively on this angry scene at the commotion it caused not only the two main characters but also the other people in the area.
How did Jo suddenly apologize? How was she able to cool her temper? What was she thinking?
Your grammar needs a bit of work; focus on asking questions correctly and using the past tense to tell a story.
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